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11.3.2010 ( Advanced ) (Writing practice - index)

I am really tired of my current situation at my job. I am looking forward for a change. I do not want to continue here, I am wasting my time. After four years working in an extraordinary environment, with the best colleagues I have ever had, suddenly, everything changed. Since November I haven’t had a real occupation, just sporadic works. In addition, my boss has criticized rudely (and unfairly in my opinion) each of those works. It is been two months since I took the decision of leaving this department, I enrolled in an internal mobility program and probably today or tomorrow I will receive an answer to my application.

Looking back I feel terribly sad, it is not fair, I worked as hard as I could, I tried to do my best. I was happy here, but it is useless to think about it, nothing can be done now. All I should do is to learn from this experience, look ahead and concentrate all my effort in my new tasks (whatever they are).

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I am really tired of my current situation at my job. I am looking forward to a change. I do not want to continue here, I am wasting my time. After four years working in an extraordinary environment, with the best colleagues I have ever had, suddenly, everything changed. Since November I haven’t had a real occupation, just sporadic jobs. In addition, my boss has criticized (UK English criticised) rudely (and unfairly in my opinion) each of those jobs. Two months ago I took the decision of leaving (to leave) this department, I enrolled in an internal mobility program and probably today or tomorrow I will receive an answer to my application.

Looking back I feel terribly sad. It is not fair, I worked as hard as I could, I tried to do my best. I was happy here, but it is useless to think about it, as nothing can be done now. All I should do is to learn from this experience, look ahead and concentrate all my effort on my new tasks (whatever they are).

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Self-assessment checklist C1

 

 

Writing
I can express myself in writing on a wide range of general or professional topics in a clear and user-friendly manner.
I can present a complex topic in a clear and well-structured way, highlighting the most important points, for example in a composition or a report.
I can present points of view in a comment on a topic or an event, underlining the main ideas and supporting my reasoning with detailed examples.
I can put together information from different sources and relate it in a coherent summary.
I can give a detailed description of experiences, feelings and events in a personal letter.
I can write formally correct letters, for example to complain or to take a stand in favour of or against something.
I can write texts which show a high degree of grammatical correctness and vary my vocabulary and style according to the addressee, the kind of text and the topic.
I can select a style appropriate to the reader in mind.